Monday, March 19, 2007

You are the one who falls to the floor
You are the one anxious for more
You are the one ready to succumb
You are the one who wants to come


Jewel Rays said...

Feels like u are talking in parables like there is a story behind all those words that shines..

Haha.. whatever it is..u are a good expresser/teaser i must say. Impressive stuff.

Like a jigsaw that must be filled or figured out. i enjoy those kinda poems that plays with ya mind.

Kudos to that kinda write ups..

Rock on! hahaha..

Southpaw unplugged said...

Well there's always a subject behind every write-up...:D
Glad u r enjoyin' it and hold on tightly there's a continuation to it coming up in some time...wink*

Keshi said...

I agree with's very much like an erotic jigsaw :)


Jewel Rays said...

hahaha.. are these real stuff on going or just the fantasy of the mind?


Southpaw unplugged said...

It is erotic, but definitely not a jigsaw...:P

@Jewel rays
Fantasies and dogs r not allowed on my place...lolz, its all real...:D

Jewel Rays said...


Dogs? as in ..

Southpaw unplugged said...

@Jewel rays
Dogs? as in***the only fart,no shit kinda things...lolz

Jewel Rays said...

hahaha...*thumbs up*


Southpaw unplugged said...

@Jewel rays

uttara said...

ahem ahem

this made me blush :p

Sera said...

Keep up the good work.